It’s time for Friday Fictioneers, and here is my contribution.
If you fancy having a go, pop onto Rochelle’s page and take a look at the photo prompt. Write your story in 100 words or less and don’t forget to post your link with the blue frog. Good luck and Happy Writing!
Thank you to Sandra Cook for this weeks superb photo.
Decisions
The old woman turned the dial. Opalescent sand poured into the bottom of the glass.
‘I hope they make the right decision,’ said a deep voice. Gorran stepped out of a break in the hedges.
The woman recoiled.
‘As long as you leave ’em be, they’ll be fine,’ she said, edging her way towards the hour glass. But he was too quick.
Gorran lifted his hands and the sand turned black.
‘You can’t do that,’ she said. ‘You’re not supposed to interfere.’
‘Looks like another bad day,’ he chuckled.
Somewhere in the distance, a scream pierced the silence.
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Interesting thoughts start here. It seems like changing the course of the sands of time comes at cost to someone
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Doesn’t it always? Thanks for reading 🙂
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That’s what keeps them coming back for more!
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It’s Gorran being troublesome again I see. I like his chuckle. Who does the deep voice belong to. Headmaster?
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As always 🙂 It definitely belongs to Gorran…or maybe the old lady has a secret or two 😉
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Hopefully, Gorran won’t be around for long, else catastrophe upon catastrophe becomes the norm.. 😉
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I hope not too! Thanks for reading Carolyn.
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Chilling last line.
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Thanks F.F 🙂
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That is a scary character/god. Very intriguing, makes me want to read more.
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Thank you gahlearner, maybe I should do a sequel, I’d like to see where this is going too😀
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Gorran is a frightening what ever it might be and I don’t wantto tangle with him.
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Me neither! Think the old lady could take him though 😁
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Probably, we old ladies wouldn’t be here if we were not really tough and resourceful. 😉
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Well that Goran dude is a bit if an ass, isn’t he?
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Absolutely, and I have a feeling he’s only just started.
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Gorran – great name for a villain. (Better than Goran.)
Agreed last line is scary.
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Thanks Patrick 😁
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Ooo! Such a wicked tale.. love it!
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Thanks Lori 😊
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My pleasure, Cheryl 🙂
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