It’s been a while, but anyone who knows me, knows I’m a sucker for a sea picture.
So here’s my contribution for Friday Fictioneers hosted by the lovely Rochelle. If you fancy having a go, write your story, approx 100 words, to the prompt on Rochelle’s page. Then add your link. If you’d like to read the other stories in this weeks story challenge, click on the blue frog 🙂
PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Tara shuffled her feet forward. She teetered on the edge of the large granite rock, pockmarked from centuries of saltwater.
Air rushed through her, the type that washes you clean, as if everything she’d done was forgiven in that moment.
Waves fell over each other, rushing, racing, desperate to be the one to consume her.
She stepped in. The icy water sent shockwaves through her body. She shivered. Her skin turned a silken deep brown and her eyes flashed lilac.
‘Seven years gone, to the sea I return,’ she sang. ‘For the life of a Selkie and the ocean I yearn.’
101 words.
Who can resist a Selkie’s call?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Who indeed…thanks for reading Neil 🙂
LikeLike
This is really well written, and some of the description is really fantastic. It’s hard to pick a favourite line, but the 2nd and 4th sentences in particular I like.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Misskzebra, you’ve just made my day ☺️
LikeLike
This Selkirk going home, but what had she been up to on the land, intriguing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
…a story for another day 🙂 Thank you for reading Michael.
LikeLike
Oh, lovely! And yes, gorgeous descriptions of the sea and how it makes her feel – you know she is at one with it, which of course she is, being a Selkie. Love a big dollop of folklore in with my sea tales too. Nicely done
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Lynn 😀
LikeLike
My pleasure 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I loved the description in this.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Clare 🙂 I’m overwhelmed by the lovely comments today. Glad you liked it.
LikeLike
I’m sure she has missed the sea, but she will be missed at land.
LikeLiked by 1 person
…at least for another seven years 🙂 Thanks for reading.
LikeLike
I agree the descriptions are fantastic. You can feel and smell the water.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much Mick 🙂
LikeLike
Beautifully written.
Especially the two line poem!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you spicedmullings, I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
There just aren’t enough selkie stories – well done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you 🙂 I agree, it seems to be one part of folklore that goes mostly ignored, have no idea why.
LikeLike
Oh, lovely! I’ve always loved Selkie stories, and this is very poetic and evocative!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for your lovely words Dreamer of Dreams 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re most welcome! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
A lovely twist at the end – she’s where she wants to be.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think so too. Thanks for reading Liz 🙂
LikeLike
Dear Cheryl,
I suspect that I’m a Selkie inside. The lilac eyes clinch the deal. 😉 Love this fanciful piece.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Me too. Thanks Rochelle, glad you liked it 🙂
LikeLike
That’s lovely, I can basically feel her relief to be home again.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks gahlearner, I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person